This is a study of reflective surfaces drawn in a 45 minute period after 15 minutes of planning. Whilst the image does show reflection of the room in the tall vase, and the reflection of light on the object in front of it, I think it could have been shown more effectively by using stronger highlights that contrast with the darker values. The clear glass jars containing water aren't clearly rendered as glass as I found dealing with the refraction of light and the objects in the water difficult to deal with. As a result, the front jar lacks contrast and could be improved by paying more attention to smaller details around this area.
The area behind the objects is very heavily shaded, I feel that this draws attention away from the main subjects of the image as they blend in with it too much. As this image was drawn using a 5B pencil, I think it might have been too soft for this type of study; the pencil smudged too easily under my hand whilst working on other areas of the image, making it hard to maintain lighter values on the page, and also creating areas in other places which were too dark. A slightly harder pencil such as a 2B might have been better to use.
The area behind the objects is very heavily shaded, I feel that this draws attention away from the main subjects of the image as they blend in with it too much. As this image was drawn using a 5B pencil, I think it might have been too soft for this type of study; the pencil smudged too easily under my hand whilst working on other areas of the image, making it hard to maintain lighter values on the page, and also creating areas in other places which were too dark. A slightly harder pencil such as a 2B might have been better to use.